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printed book page 33 - how to keep a meritocracy in check
2nd para "I remember vividly a conversation that..." I think needs a pause or rearrangement:

1. I remember vividly, a conversation that
2. I vividly remember a conversation that

page 50 - What the community taught me about open orgs
3rd para, last sentence "It talks about are things you're asking" - I think there is an unneeded "are" in the quote

1. It talks about things you're asking
2. All it talks about are things you're asking

page 65 - Why aren't we more invested in our work
last para - "and specifically how their work is**,**connected is connected to it -- has a comma instead of a space.

page 74 - Appreciating the full power of open
last para "And it's integral to openness because without it people don't have the knowledge" -- missing a comma:
And it's integral to openness because without it**,** people don't have the knowledge