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" the newly elected BoJ governor Kazuo Ueda"

• Maybe type out what BoJ stands for, assuming Bank of Japan

" raised rates from 11 to 20% in "

• 11% to 20%, idk just looks weird to me without it

Just an idea - I like your lightbulb blurbs they convey little factoids. You crack a joke "It would also help if the Fed stopped printing trillions of dollars, but that’s a different talk show." inside of one and i like the line but might be better in the actual article vs the information bubble if that makes sense

"Japan hasn’t had an inflation problem the asset pricing bubble in the late 1980s. Since then, the economy has performed worse than the Cleveland Browns."

• missing a 'since' and may want to combine into a single statement

"By committing to keep 10-year bond yields at 0%, even if inflation rises, the BOJ signals that it will continue to keep borrowing costs low in the future, which should, theoretically, raise expectations of future inflation and thereby stimulate spending today."

• 5 commas in this sentence. Maybe turn to bullet points? I still don't fully understand the Yield Vurce Control Policy so maybe some additional details? Clearly its a complicated topic so easier said than done

"Also part of this policy is that the short-term interest rate is set at -0.1%, essentially letting banks borrow for free and charging them if they don’t spend it. And they’re still not spending it!"

• why are they not spending it

seen BOJ and BoJ

Middle bubble doesn't have lightbulb but 1st and 3rd do

What do I need to fix?

Mention that you need to exit 'insert' mode in Vim